October beach
in all the footprints
the tread of shoes
I say we kick off our shoes
let the cool sand soothe our feet
~Jane & Cie~
Notes:
The Hokku stanza was written by Jane Reichhold (1937 -2016). The Akegu (two-line) stanza was created by me.
2 comments:
Yes, sure,we should have the natural feeling. Nice.
thank you, rudraprayaga.
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